The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/09
The whole metamorphosis is indeed a miracle from God. A nice entry and if Butterflies could think, I'll bet right on target!
05/29/09
Very nice POV--I enjoyed it both literally and metaphorically.

Purely from a mechanical standpoint, I wonder if it'd be easier on the eyes with the headings in bold and the text in regular print?

Beautiful writing, and I really felt your narrator's joy at the end.
06/03/09
Excellent metaphore. Thank you for sharing, I really enjoyed reading it!
06/03/09
Great entry. You had me wondering for a while, what or who was imprisoned. Caterpillar to butterfly, great use of topic. Nicely done!
06/03/09
Thankyou for sharing the transformation that God can make in our lives. An interesting and unique way of portraying this. Thanks! - Colin
06/03/09
Beautiful! I'm surprised I didn't guess this until the very end. Well done.
06/03/09
LOVELY! I'm glad this wasn't another description of the classic baby being born. You took something old and used and made it into something amazing. The butterfly POV was simply wonderful! A great read!
06/03/09
You did a remarkable job capturing both sets of emotions. Initially, I could feel your MC's pain and then her joy when she was released from the darkness. Well done!
06/03/09
Just wonderful. I didn't know "what" until near the end. Loved the POV.
Mona
06/03/09
So different! Creative! Unique! I thoroughly enjoyed this creation. :)
06/03/09
So creative and lovely. Well done!
06/04/09
Pamela, this is a wonderful piece! As I read it, I was wondering what kind of prison this person had made for themselves, and I was surprised when I finally learned the answer! Great writing and an inspiring message for all of us! :) Congrats on placing so high in the top 40 and in Advanced!