The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/09
Both well-written and terrible!

I wonder if it'd be more effective if you just ended with her repeating "no darkness..."

Thanks for shedding light on this horrible practice.
06/02/09
Very good story, sad ending.
A very dark take on the topic, but well written and a compelling read.