The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/09
This really preaches!

A very minor suggestion: you don't want the first thing your reader sees to be your word count. You really don't have to include it at all, since word counts are checked during the judging process. Just let your words shine!

Thanks for this excellent, inspirational piece.
05/31/09
Well done. I couldn't agree more, especially in the indictment that our church so often fails to share this light with persons living in the darkness. Thanks for the wise reminder to all us that our light needs to shine!
06/02/09
Great thoughts! How would we react today if Jesus walked into our churches? Would His Light offend us? I hope not...You've given me a lot to mull over. Well done!
So profoundly full of truth. Thank you for a job nicely done.