The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/09
When I read the reference, I went back and read the poem again. It was good the first time, even better the second. Well done.
05/29/09
This is just lovely. I, too, went back and read the passage. What a brilliant take on the story, you made me see it anew.
Mona
05/29/09
Such a flowing of lines. Beautiful. Good meter and rhythm. Lovely piece!!God bless!!
05/30/09
Absolutely lovely: flows smoothly and full of beautiful thoughts. Well done.
05/31/09
I also enjoyed it the first time, but even more so after I read the scripture reference. What a wonderful use of this week's topic. Well done!
06/02/09
Excellent--I'd love to see this in a memorial service rather than some of the icky poetry I've heard there. This is top-notch, and such a unique perspective!
06/03/09
A most interesting poem, giving delight not only to the eyes but to the mind. How well you conveyed the message of Scripture in your poem.
06/03/09
Great lines in the last verse. I love it. Nicely done!
06/03/09
Excellent. Loved this and the truth it conveys. Thanks - Colin
06/03/09
It is definitely better each time I read it. This would be perfect printed on a funeral service leaflet. Nicely done!