The Official Writing Challenge
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It took me a while to catch what this was about. I'd never thought of God's reaction to the termination of a little life in this way before. Very thought provoking. You could even expand it a little.
This is eye-opening, Tim. And eye-tearing! I'm glad you are entering the Challenge again;
give us more.
WOW. How heartbreaking! This is beautiful but I did want more as your description and tenderness is so awesome. Keep on writing for the kingdom!:0)
Clever in its brevity. BUT I needed someone else's comment to understand what was going on. I was thinking twins or possibly a subsequent implantation a month later. So at one level maybe a little TOO clever...