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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Before and After (05/14/09)

TITLE: Cozy
By Preacher Johnson
05/21/09


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Cozy is how I would have to describe life so far. I am always warm. Moving around in this liquid is like floating in air. Whenever I need to feel secure or when I feel lonely I move up here to my favorite spot, right under Mommaís rib.

Oh this is wonderful. Still growing, still developing, just last week my fingernails formed. I donít think Mommy feels me when I kick yet but I can tell I am getting stronger; so it wonít be long.

Whatís that? Something is in here! Gotta go to Mommyís rib.

Ouch!

Mommy help!

Mommy it hurts, help me.

Mommy itís pulling me!

Mommy why?

The tenderness of His hand on my cheek is as soft as a million feathers and the warmth of His touch is greater than a million romances.

ďLord, your face is so loving. Why did you wipe away my tears when you have tears of your own?Ē

The LORDís eyes are filled with holy water, His lips are quivering. God Almighty is having trouble speaking. He is weeping.


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Christine Dunn05/22/09
It took me a while to catch what this was about. I'd never thought of God's reaction to the termination of a little life in this way before. Very thought provoking. You could even expand it a little.
Patricia Herchenroether05/26/09
This is eye-opening, Tim. And eye-tearing! I'm glad you are entering the Challenge again;
give us more.
Blessings,
Patty
Janice Fitzpatrick05/27/09
WOW. How heartbreaking! This is beautiful but I did want more as your description and tenderness is so awesome. Keep on writing for the kingdom!:0)
Gregory Kane05/28/09
Clever in its brevity. BUT I needed someone else's comment to understand what was going on. I was thinking twins or possibly a subsequent implantation a month later. So at one level maybe a little TOO clever...