The Official Writing Challenge
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Reminiscent of something that may have gone through the mind of Anne Frank. I was inside this child's mind the whole time; and, when directed to the right line - it was foreboding.
This is a poignant reminder of a blot on history--well told, so we see into the mind of the MC.
You brought this horrific slice of history alive through the mind of your MC. Holocaust stories always stir me emotionally, and this one is no exception. That's great writing.
I saw a couple typos, but a well-written and thoughtful story on a shameful period of time.
You put me right inside her head. Perfect title, and great job of characterization.
These stories are so hard to read, the hurt never lessens.