The Official Writing Challenge
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Reminiscent of something that may have gone through the mind of Anne Frank. I was inside this child's mind the whole time; and, when directed to the right line - it was foreboding.
This is a poignant reminder of a blot on history--well told, so we see into the mind of the MC.
05/23/09
You brought this horrific slice of history alive through the mind of your MC. Holocaust stories always stir me emotionally, and this one is no exception. That's great writing.
I saw a couple typos, but a well-written and thoughtful story on a shameful period of time.
05/25/09
You put me right inside her head. Perfect title, and great job of characterization.
05/25/09
These stories are so hard to read, the hurt never lessens.
Strong.
Mona