The Official Writing Challenge
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05/25/09
You had me pulling for the MC/home. Very well done. You kept it interesting to the end.
Mona
Oh, I love this! There are so many nuggets of truth in the "Perfect Home." Excellent writing.
Very unique take on the topic. This is well-written. Kudos.
I loved how you looked at it from the house's perspective and it's pain and family were very real to it. Sometimes items like houses or mannequins have perspectives you would never guess until you get inside of them and write.
01/27/10
Micheline, I plan to feature this for the Front Page Showcase for the week of February 8. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!