The Official Writing Challenge
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This is sooo good! I like your style and cleverness. Your humor and descriptions are so right on. Great job!!
This represents all those "before" and "after" ads on weight loss miracles.

The internal struggles are still the same, no matter what the external frame is supporting. You have shown a profound truth here.

(now to go shed a few myself...)
Your story's "fats and thins" kept me interested to the end. I liked the MC's character growth.
Very creative take on a well-used subject. Kept my interest from start to finish.
Superb characterization and what a great message woven in. A great piece.