The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/09
Cute story of Izzy's natural
cycle of life.
For easier reading, I would suggest spaces between your paragraphs.



























I love stories about God's non-human creations and this one did not disappoint me. This house held a menagerie, just like mine as a child. (to the chagrin of my parents)
The long paragraphs were tough on my old eyes, but I got through your very creative entry. Nice work.