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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Before and After (05/14/09)

TITLE: He Did it His Way
By Genia Gilbert
05/19/09


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The boy was born protesting,
Both fists raised in the air;
He came, intent on proving
That life was just not fair.

As a toddler, he was charming,
His smile could be quite warm;
But still the smallest crisis
Brought on a raging storm.

A challenge to his parents,
A trial to all his friends;
He failed to honor others,
And refused to make amends.

In junior high and high school,
He altered not his course;
What he wanted, that he did,
And made his way with force.

His mother’s heart was broken,
At her offspring’s set of mind;
She longed to turn and lead him
To the Savior, good and kind.

But leaving home in anger,
His heart he hardened still;
The path he chose was tragic,
And centered on his will.

With time, he ran the gamut
of crime and all sin’s calls;
Sadly, soon he found himself,
Within dark prison walls.

Weeks and months went slowly,
And his heart began to break;
He longed for those who loved him,
Viewed his life one big mistake.

He searched for peace and comfort,
And a voice he seemed to hear -
His mother, crying, pleading,
“Seek the Savior, He is near.”

So to his knees he stumbled,
And sought the Master’s face;
His mind, his heart he yielded,
And found the Lord of grace.

On his release, he hastened,
To those who knew him best;
He asked for their forgiveness,
And then his soul found rest.

His mother’s smile received him,
As tears streamed down her face;
With tender arms she hugged him,
As joy took sorrow’s place.

From that day, to his life’s end,
The change was plain to all;
God’s touch brought joy and love,
To him who chose to call.

And so it shall forever be,
That He will hear each cry;
He’ll change and help the seeker,
And show that He is nigh.

His compassion changes not,
His heart is searching still;
He reaches for the broken one,
To wrap in His sweet will.


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Christine Dunn05/21/09
Excellent - This was like a modern interpretation of the Prodigal Son, written as a poem! It offers so much hope for mothers like this who pray.
Linda Wright05/21/09
Very enjoyable!
Charla Diehl 05/22/09
This was a great poem. Love the message it conveys--that Jesus hears us when we call--that he changes lives--and that there is power in prayer. Never give up on those in need of prayer--God will answer in His timing. The flow, rhyme and meter were A+ and I hope to see this in the EC list. Thumbs up to you.
Sharon Kane05/26/09
This flowed well, with a strong regular meter, and your word choice made it taste of anger and rebellion!

Be careful with pronouns; all the way through 'He' and 'His' referred to the boy/young man. Then in the last 2 verses it suddenly referred to the Lord. It is pretty obvious that there has been a change, but even so it is one of those things that can cause the reader to 'stumble' and that spoils an otherwise good read.

You showed powerfully the Lord's ability to rescue absolutely anyone! Nice job.
Jan Ackerson 07/01/09
Genia, I've just found this wonderful poem, and I plan to feature it in the Front Page Showcase for the week of July 5. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page, and congratulations!
Lisa Johnson 07/06/09
Awesome... beautiful... excellent... I absolutely love your poem. It speaks to the love and devotion of a Godly mother, and brings to mind the verse about righteous, fervent prayer and how effective it can be. Thank you for sharing!
Beth LaBuff 07/07/09
What a contrast… starting with your title. This goes against the current thinking of this age. Very nice work on this, Genia. I'm so glad to see this featured on the FW homepage.
Temilade Adefioye07/08/09
Very Very Nice
Coleene VanTilburg 07/09/09
This is a testimony to many praying Moms who sometimes get discouraged. God's timing is perfect and our faithful prayers will be honored. It encouraged me. Thank you for this poem and glad it was placed here.


   
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