The Official Writing Challenge
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Well written and thought provoking. I really liked your title, it says a lot about the true temperance of the poem.
05/23/09
very profound and I liked the style with which you deliver the message
I liked the whole poem, but I was really captivated by the encouraging verse of "His standards."
A nice, thoughtful piece. Thank you-loved the last part.
05/23/09
Easy to read and a good message.
05/24/09
Excellent Free Verse! Loved it ... just loved it!