The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the memories of the historical moments and the angels who protected the grandfather and grandson. Well done. I guess I'm tired tonight as I was a little confused at the ending when the figure became smaller. I like this though. :0)
05/24/09
Loved this story even though a bit confusing throughout due to the lack of properly placed "quotation marks." Otherwise, very well done and an enjoyable read that was moving and touching. Kudos!
Oooh, I like goosebumpy type stories. It was a nice touch that the angel who protected the grandfather was the same one who protected the grandson. Good job.