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05/14/09
I like how you tied everything together in the last paragraph, giving the second read the "I get it!" factor. Nicely Done!
05/15/09
Ah, yes, to awake from a nightmare to the blessings of God...thanks for reminding me of all the good that God has provided.
05/15/09
Ah, this was a pleasant and comforting read! At the end I thought, "Yeah, that's happened to me before too!"
05/16/09
Your title is perfect for this type of story. "You never miss the water until the well runs dry" was the thought that kept running through my mind as I read your "daily" account of people, nature and just normal things we take for granted. You're right..."life ain't bad" (pardon the grammar). Well done.
05/16/09
Solid piece.

I loved that opening line.