The Official Writing Challenge
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This was beautifully and powerfully written. I was moved with your character. Amazing writing.
Wonderfully written and right on topic. Well done.
05/16/09
An exquisite testimony to the missionary spirit.

To gaze into those eyes ... I know of what you speak.
06/01/09
Love the sensory details here--the tart fruit juice, the fiery tree--they really add to the atmosphere of this heartbreaking, but hope-filled story.

Thanks for the link, too! I'm headed there now...