The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/09
Great job. I may not be a mom yet, but I could still feel her frustration. Glad the husband understood!

By the way, I like that idea... Make the checklist fit what you did at the end of the day, rather than the "normal" way... Hmmm.... I may have to try that some time. ;)
05/17/09
Love this! I too have found myself trying to get done what I think is important, and my children are left wanting. This was a bit convicting, but I love the element of hope that it brings as well. Great piece!
05/17/09
Every mother identifies with this one! I remember it like it was yesterday...
05/18/09
Oooooh yes. SO been there! This was such a fun read!