The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/09
Many people are lured by the materialism you describe. You've got some great lines, words, and thoughts in your poem. Nice work!
05/16/09
A sad tale of truth written in a neat poetic way. It takes talent to write traditional poetry - (perfectly rhymed) and therefore I know this one took time and effort. Good job plus an important message.
05/16/09
I like the sad truth here, and it is so well written!