The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/09
Intriguing. At first I thought it was a prisoner/jail situation. I have often thought about those who are "entrusted" with our bodies after death.
May be just me, but I kind of wished you had not added the second part. The 1st part was so rich, the MC special. The 2nd part more matter-of-fact.
But, I enjoyed it alot.
Mona
05/18/09
Very well-done. I was definitely engrossed and curious where this was going.