The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/09
:) Great job on this one. I could hear and picture everything happening. I could even hear the "Game Show Host" voice. You captured it perfectly.
05/17/09
Cute and clever. Love the three "types" of people and the conclusion, of course!

Some of the dialogue felt a bit stilted, but perhaps that was part of the "game show thing" - not sure those conversations ever DO sound natural.

A fun piece!
05/17/09
A fun and clever way to deliver a complex (and not uncontroversial) message!
05/18/09
Makes a good sermon. It does boil down to making the right choices. Interesting.
Mona