The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/09
I like how you unfolded this parable (stomach growl, rain, embezzling, drugs). Your ending reminded me of the prodigal son. I wanted to rejoice with the dad (over finding his son and taking him home.)
05/17/09
I assume this is fiction, but it Does, Has and Will continue to happen in Real Life, also. I was moved to the point of tears. A writer that can emote this much emotion from their reader is indeed a Writer with a Capital "W". Extremely well written, perfect scripture, and excellent title. Kudos!