The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/09
Some things in life are relative. I liked your contrast of your Mom's morning words compared to the drill sergeant's. Your meter is very good. Your last stanza warmed my heart. :)
05/19/09
You've shared a common thread with this piece! Really enjoyed it and smiled all the way to the end. Reality set in, didn't it?! Well, I'm retired now so guess what? I get to sleep in and I love it!