The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/09
You packed a lot of fun into this. :) I think Katy showed them she could act. I enjoyed what she did to get ready for this performance (untucked her blouse and disheveled her hair. :)
05/18/09
There are the times we put it all on the line...and it pays off as with your MC.
Enjoyed the storytelling.
Mona
This was a fun piece! After reading the first paragraph--I thought it was going to be a child/teenager trying to convince her parents of something!
05/18/09
Wow! Now this is one trauma drama queen. Good job.
05/18/09
This is a funny piece. :-)
05/19/09
Very good writing - the dialog was realistic and the descriptions made it easy to picture as I was reading. Your approach to the topic is original and creative. Very nice!
Very good! I daresay your mc got her point across.