The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/09
This was pretty good.

There were a couple of times where it might have been better to break up longer sentences into a couple shorter sentences or combined a couple shorter ones into a longer one.

A good message to remember here!
05/17/09
All a matter of perspective! We need to be reminded how bad it can be! This does it well.