The Official Writing Challenge
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You made the emotion so real in your story, I could identify perfectly with your MC--with the bad in his life and a glimmer of hope for the good. Your descriptions put me right there. Great job.
Your descriptions are absolutely masterful, as is your characterization. Just a marvelous story. Hope you continue this. I'd love to hear how it turned out for these two.
You have nailed a grieving child's tentative grip on what will be in store for the future. There is hopefulness in heartbreak here.
I love your story telling ability. From beginning, middle to end this is wonderfully told. The pace was perfect as well. Great writing!