The Official Writing Challenge
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05/14/09
Very nice poem...I love how God always knows best.
05/15/09
Boy, could I relate...I despise the word "wait", and yet, when I listen to that voice it has never steered me wrong. Thanks for sharing this great poem. Your meter and rhyme were well done.
05/17/09
Great fun with a timely message and a great rhythm. I particularly enjoyed the lines that said, "a ghost cat killed my mouse...My ‘hertz” were hurting, megs were few,
the RAM had run away." Exquisite
05/18/09
Ooh, just lots of laughs. With a message. Loved it alot. Playful and yet...
Mona
05/20/09
Such clever word choices! Rhyme and rhythm is top noch, and the story your poem told is engaging, with bits of humor and a wonderful message.
05/21/09
Great poem! Lots of real world truth and wonderful wordplay besides.
06/03/09
I read in Genesis how God prevented a pharoah from sinning as he took Sarah to be his wife. This is a great illustration of how He still keeps us from sinning in spite of ourselves. Nice job.
10/27/10
I absolutely loved this. You are so hysterical. After reading your entry this week I was reminded how good you are. I've missed reading your work and was delighted to see another piece so I thought I'd go back and read some of your articles before my time. I hope you don't ever take that long of a vacation again, your work is great and should be shared!!