The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/09
You had me worried. What a difference a "good" nanny made. I was transported to that home with the little twin girls. Your title is so unusal, but makes perfect sense after reading the story.
05/21/09
once there was a good sister and a bad sister.... Well, this bad little sister never made it in time to leave a comment BEFORE the week was up so i have to do it AFTER.
good story.like the use of the accents for the nannys. hope deferred makes the heart sick... glad this hope was fed!
Thank you, ladies! Didn't know if my readers would get that the second nanny is Hope. That's what the name Esperanza means in Spanish & Italian. Thus literally Hope feeds. :-)