The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/09
A clearly written message in this piece. Consider opening with a specific anecdote to draw in the readers and keep them reading. Good work.
05/19/09
You're not alone, God Himself says in the Scriptures that "He hates a liar," so you're in good Company. God's still chipping away on me - like a Potter, trying to mould me into perfection; and it's taking a lifetime to be sure. Thanks for your engaging and endearing thoughts.