The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/09
The vivid opening drew me in to this piece. Then the bulk of the story contains more telling than showing. More specific scenes will give depth to this poignant story. I really liked the title you chose.
What a priviledge to learn from this godly couple.
What a great story! I admire your skill in managing to put a whole life together in one short piece and with so much detail included. And you made it so very interesting. Good job!
05/19/09
A great beginning that lures the reader on. A great faith that encourages the reader to keep the faith. A sad, but engaging story that leaves the reader in tears; but like the writer says..."Underneath are the Everylasting strong Arms" of our loving and merciful Heavenly Father. An interesting and poignant story that keeps the readers interest. Nicely written and well done!
God bless you for writing this piece and sharing it with us. God is indeed the faithful everlasting Arms that we can trust. And we can always find shelter in His loving presence.

Thank you.