The Official Writing Challenge
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Very smart writing! :)
05/15/09
I liked the MC's voice in this piece. Just the right amount of humor. Good work.
05/15/09
I remember that "tan in a can" stuff...it turned me orange instead of brown. Thanks for sharing about being blonde from an angle I never considered...always envied the blondes myself. Loved the encouragement at the end of the story.
05/17/09
I was so tempted to cut and paste a blondes joke in the comments box. But then I decided that my life might not be worth living afterwards!
I thank God for the diversity within his creation. Among my four sons I have two blondies, one dark-haired and one red-haird. Aren't genes a wonderful thing!
05/19/09
I find the honesty in this piece SO appealing! The truth is that most females wish they were blonde - and you are telling them all that it isn't all what it's cracked up to be! This fascinating insight into the life of a blonde was honest and forthright - and I loved the easy, down-to-earth way it was written. An enjoyable read, and I, once a brunette and now gray like you...am no longer jeolous of blonds. Thanks for such delightful entertainment. Well Done!