The Official Writing Challenge
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This is very interesting. I sense there is more to this story than you had time to tell. Good job-you captured my interest, I was wondering where you were going with this.
I agree with Sara--there's GOT to be more to this story! Like Star Wars--go backward and tell it from the beginning now. Kept me intrigued, Tim. I just had to know what was happening next.
For a last minute, non-edited entry it was very well done (better than my take my time and edit it a couple times entries). I would also like to see more of this. Well done.
Such a creative entry! I wish I understood it all, but it's still well-written, even with some confusion in there. :)
Good job Tim, totally intrigued me, I want to know the rest of the story.