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05/07/09
Though I'm glad for the happy ending, it seemed like it came too quickly. the ending had a good twist to it, i'm glad it was a brother speaking to him and not a friend, lol. it added more to his character. good job.
05/11/09
So so much truth here, and well stated. The one sided attitude to judgement was also very relevant.
I also thought the turn around was a bit quick, but I guess you bumped into the word limit.
I especially liked the concerted effort the couple made to keep falling in love. Best advice any marriage counsellor could give, alongside being quick to say "I'm sorry"!
The advice to keep on falling in love with your spouse is just right in your story.