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05/07/09
Though I'm glad for the happy ending, it seemed like it came too quickly. the ending had a good twist to it, i'm glad it was a brother speaking to him and not a friend, lol. it added more to his character. good job.
05/11/09
So so much truth here, and well stated. The one sided attitude to judgement was also very relevant.
I also thought the turn around was a bit quick, but I guess you bumped into the word limit.
I especially liked the concerted effort the couple made to keep falling in love. Best advice any marriage counsellor could give, alongside being quick to say "I'm sorry"!
05/11/09
The advice to keep on falling in love with your spouse is just right in your story.