The Official Writing Challenge
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05/07/09
Awww! This could go a long way! I hope Nate and Joey become friends, it looks like it would be a great story that way! Neat job!
You did an excellent job with the contrasts in your story, and presented a good message as well.
05/12/09
Excellent portrayal of the two children, what separates them, what binds them together.
05/12/09
This was sad, each wanting what they thought the other had. The ending was very good, leaving it open for lots of possible interaction.
05/12/09
I enjoyed reading this story. A great reminder that sometimes "the grass can seem greener..." Thanks for sharing.