The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, wow... I didn't expect this, and it surprised me in a really good way... :-) Great thoughts here!
05/08/09
Cleverly written. I liked the attention to detail which was perfect for a private detective. A good moral tale told in a light hearted way.
05/10/09
Excellent writing, with an important message told through both the main story about the couple and the "side story" of the crack in the windshield!! Very clever! :)
Very well done! I lke the symbolism and detail here. Also the latter part is a suprise to the reader, or at least I didn't expect this. Good job!!
I liked the cracked windshield and the description in the 1st paragraph. Well told. I was wondering where this would lead.
05/14/09
Congratulations on your third place recognition. Sensitive topic to tell in a story but you did a great job. Well done!
05/14/09
Oooo, this was good. Outstanding last line! Congrats on the EC!
Very creative take on the topic - I really like it. Good thinking!