The Official Writing Challenge
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The last 5 stanzas seem a plea for final freedom - after so much repetitive pain. Praise God there is an answer: JESUS!
08/03/05
Is there freedom and deliverence? I suppose it should be up to the reader to say, yeah or nay..I say yes, there is in Christ. God bless ya, littlelight
I like this. Good job!
08/05/05
Love the detail of poetry. This one is very very nice. Good work!
08/06/05
Very nice!