The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/09
Very funny. I could picture the whole scene. Some great turns of phrase.
You remind me of my husband and me. Only our kids would laugh at loud at the very thought of giving us dancing lessons. I personally am for the do-sa-do motif on the bathtub! Fun read.
05/10/09
What a hoot! I'm still chuckling. (My favorites were the part about the vertigo and about the remote looking closer in the morning.) Excellent, well-written story with great humor.
Thx for writing this. I needed a chuckle. I think many of us can relate to this cute couple here. How funny! Love it!
05/13/09
Definitely one of my favourites. Your opening two paragraphs had me in stitches and decidedly feeling my age. And I ain't even that old yet!