The Official Writing Challenge
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I want to know more... did he find the girl? Climbing in that harness and leaping out into what could have been oblivion took courage. I can just see him zooming in and out of the clouds on his way to rescue his love. Good story, I really enjoyed it but want more.
Oh boy. This was exciting. I want to know if he was able to rescue her. Did they marry? What happens next? Good cliffhanger. You definitely got me wanting more.