The Official Writing Challenge
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05/07/09
The title drew me in and your well-written story didn't disappoint me at all. Loved the ending! Well done.
05/10/09
I liked the line about density being better than sparsity. It fit the character well. I also enjoyed the ending...glad the gorceries were put away correctly. lol.