The Official Writing Challenge
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04/30/09
This is excellent! How very insightful and how very lucky those students are to have a teacher like that. Good job.
04/30/09
Jennifer didn't feel real and I wasn't drawn in to her world. But I think the spiritual lesson is well-illustrated and very relevant.
04/30/09
Oh, I forgot to say, I love the title. It made me feel like I just had to see what ooblek was.
05/01/09
I have a feeling that Jennifer was very real and that this lesson may have actually taken place. It seems as though black and white keeps getting replaced with gray and pretty soon all truth will be replaced by kinda - sorta. Thank God for teachers like Jennifer.
Excellent lesson...excellent writing...nicely done.
This was a great illustration, and an excellent reminder to probe gently in order to slip through defenses.