The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/09
The Title...hmmm? Somehow it seemed incorrect...gramatically speaking. (Or perhaps it's just me). The story itself was not my 'cup of tea' (entertainment-wise) and possibly over my head (brain-wise), and fell short (in my estimation) Topic-wise. This is a Simon Cowell critique on my part. Sorry, but honesty is the best policy. I'm sure, however, political "junkies" would not be bored by it, and will love it! So, not to worry about one foolish commenter, okay? (*.*).
I enjoyed the story and the dialog. The title didn't work for me, either. I think the word "extent" should be "extend." Keep writing.