The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent descriptions. I felt like I was standing in the prison yard watching the action unfold. Great work.
I hate to burst your bubble and put a damper on this terrific, intriguing, in-depth and very well written" story; but due to many years of working at a Prison...this couldn't happen. No weapons are allowed by guards and death row inmates NEVER mingle with other inmates on the yard or anywhere else. But this is indeed a Great story, and definitely keeps the interest of the reader throughout. I loved it! An excellent entry! (Sorry 'bout this bursting your bubble critique).
I enjoyed seeing the soft heart of a hardened criminal. All things are possible... Good job!
Incredibly well-written. You had my attention from the get-go and I wasn't disappointed once I reached the end.