The Official Writing Challenge
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04/30/09
I'm glad that Robin did get a good "going over" I felt bad for poor Mr.Gray and his hearing aid. There were a few good bits of humor and a lovely satisfying ending! Great stuff!
05/06/09
I like the humor in this story and the good lesson at the end. I think you could do without most of the first paragraph and just jump right in to the dialogue. That's just my opinion though. :)
05/06/09
You did a great job showing Mr. Gray's frustration with his hearing-aid and the dialogue around him. My father-in-law used a hearing aid and had many of these same complaints. Thank God for wise bosses. This was a good read.