The Official Writing Challenge
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04/30/09
An enjoyable piece. Good work.
05/05/09
This is masterful and really touched my heart. Love this line:
The King knows my name? Phillip stood a bit taller.
05/07/09
Marita... You were so close (11th place). I want you to know that I LOVE this story. The depth of Bible truth in this is soooo good and with the whole "kingdom" feel. I particularly like the sentence about Phillip leaving his father and mother. The fact that the King is so personal and had a specific plan for Phillip is very comforting. Your ending is powerful, with the "well done, my faithful servant, well done". This is just excellent!!!
05/07/09
The King demanded hard work, but He also gave much love! I really enjoyed this encouraging story of Phillip and the King! I am partial to allegories! :) Great job!