The Official Writing Challenge
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An enjoyable piece. Good work.
This is masterful and really touched my heart. Love this line:
The King knows my name? Phillip stood a bit taller.
Marita... You were so close (11th place). I want you to know that I LOVE this story. The depth of Bible truth in this is soooo good and with the whole "kingdom" feel. I particularly like the sentence about Phillip leaving his father and mother. The fact that the King is so personal and had a specific plan for Phillip is very comforting. Your ending is powerful, with the "well done, my faithful servant, well done". This is just excellent!!!
The King demanded hard work, but He also gave much love! I really enjoyed this encouraging story of Phillip and the King! I am partial to allegories! :) Great job!