The Official Writing Challenge
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04/30/09
This was pretty interesting. There seems to be much more to this story than we actually get to read. I can certainly relate to having those kinds of teachers. ^_^ a typo though, "blest" is actually "blessed". ^_^ Great job here! I'm glad Ann did well.
05/06/09
There is a lot of truth here that would be good for many teens to learn! I think it would be great if you could "show" more of the story using dialogue. You could expand the conversation they had to prett much tell all that came before it, but just in a more relaxed teen style. Anyway, just my opinion. Keep on sharing!