The Official Writing Challenge
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Fun linguistic twist with an intense message. Liked this challenge: "“My darling, Donatella…Your search for riches has consumed you. Your secret yearnings ‘ave blocked God’s way of stirring true treasures inside-a you heart.”
08/02/05
I liked the Americanized version of Italiano. (he-he) It's like eating chef-boy-R-Dee. Wonderful rendition! Nice entry! God bless, littlelight
08/04/05
I liked the flavor part for the designer hand-a-bags! And I enjoyed the perspective of your entry - very creative!
08/04/05
You-a silly Amer-eee-kan!You make-a me laugh and tink of bee-u-tiful tings.
What a sweet story with a great message and so much fun along the way too! Different and entertaining!
Imaginative and creative yet with a great message. Loved it.
08/05/05
I could see the characters. You made them lively enough! Good work!
08/05/05
A fun a-read :)
08/06/05
Very cute.
Magnif-eeee-cent!!!!
08/07/05
Very real characterisation of Donatella. Felt her dissapointment. Glad they found unity at the end.
Excellent story, with an amazing message.
Thank you, and God bless,

Kevin