The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/09
Oh wow. Wonderful characterization - especially of the mother. What an incredibly strong woman, and what a message for both sides. Love the metamorphosis of the soldier.
05/05/09
Intriguing! A bit of history woven into a story where your characters truly came to life. I could feel your MC's frustration, I could see her anger.