The Official Writing Challenge
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04/30/09
I liked the way you chose to tell the story though letters. Creative.
Nice way to show a transformation in a hard heart. It looks like they will be back together soon. Well done.
A real awakening as he goes through a gamut of emotions and his vision begins to clear, encouraging his love to grow. Skillfully crafted.
05/05/09
I, too, like the way you told your story in letter form. The message was very effective that way. I enjoyed seeing the husband's progression in each letter.