The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a fun and light-hearted story. I liked the voice of the MC and the kindly robber too. The dialog moved the story along at a nice pace and I liked the 'gem' of an ending.
Funny story. The pacing and descriptions were just right.
A charming story with some delightful characters. I felt that the story lacked a little in tension, a result perhaps of the very unusual interplay between the laissez-faire attitude of the old woman and the implied violence of the convicts. All in all a good exercise in pushing the boundaries
I love your MC with her soft exterior and steely interior. This was a really fun read. Thanks for sharing.
This was fun, thank you, I enjoyed it I could almost see it happening.
“Good morning, gentlemen,” she said, “I don’t believe we’ve met.”

Cool, calm, collected, comical! That describes the quote and the main character! Great story! I loved it!