The Official Writing Challenge
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05/01/09
Oh...that's wicked....; )
05/02/09
The Devil tried to use Scripture against Jesus during the temptation in the wilderness. Your story develops this idea and gives us a few pointers for our own spiritual development. Well done.
Just one quibble: I wasn't sure that the expression 'silly goose' quite fitted in with the tone of the letter.
By the way, well done for remembering the acknowledgement to Lewis.
05/05/09
Excellent!