The Official Writing Challenge
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04/30/09
A tender, well-written piece. I feel like I know this main character after reading about her. Good work.
05/01/09
Long Title but wonderful story with great characters and gently humorous POV. delightful reminiscence.
Wonderful nostalgic piece...wonderful remembrance of a sis whose gone home.
05/02/09
...And at the end of this entry my cheeks are stained with tears. A lovely, well-written story with heart, love, and a bit of humor mixed in. It touched me deeply. Nice piece of work and "RIGHT ON" topic-wise. A great, but solemn read.
05/05/09
My eyes bugged out imagining those to little girls standing on a third-story ledge. I have two sisters like this except they are twins. What one didn't think to do, the other did think of it. I could truly relate to your story. I liked the sisters' nicknames as well.