The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderfully descriptive, especially the opening scenes of the orphanange. Well done!
04/30/09
I hate to admit it, but this one is better than mine.
04/30/09
I liked how the main character's heart changed just by opening the Bible. Good writing in this piece.
05/01/09
Oh, I'm so happy this is a true story. Thank you for sharing this lovely story. It fit nicely with this week's theme.
05/03/09
I like the way you've written honestly; it makes us feel the mc's emotions and experience her change of heart.