The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story-crafting. I can see, hear, feel and smell the people and their surroundings. It was a little hard to understand in some places because of punctuation errors.
You have created a unique world in this piece. It seemed a bit light on topic, though. Very creative descriptions throughout.
A clever well woven fanciful story. I enjoyed it very much. Will we see a sequel?
I enjoyed the story, well written, but I only see the enemy of our faith, not the hero.